Spectator sport: The
Kitchen at Home
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I got the picture from here |
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I got the picture from here |
It
smells so sour, with no salt, so boring when eating, and the kitchen looked
nice and clean. The scenery is very old and the scent makes us want to sleep.
It was a place filled with instant noodle, everywhere, instant noodle. “The
bowl of instant noodle smells
unseemly like (tom-yum) but it is (tom yum Kung)
flavored. The noodles looked
mellow but are as hard as rock, so hard, rigid and hard to chew. The
microwave is not working so well either. It sounds like “Ekk-pow! Ding-ping! Ping-
pang, ding- dong” and the food that is cooking inside burned every time.
Sometimes the banana rot on top of the microwave and it looked like fried
(poop) and it smelled like tuna in the mayonnaise can. Inside the cupboard is
storage. Like soy-sauce, hays- blue-boy, canned food etc... Sometimes, there
are so many
disparity cockroaches in the garbage can and it eating the plastic bag which makes
the smell comes out and it stinks so much. There are green, black, and even white cockroach.It smelled like rotting banana mixed
with fried boiled egg and preserved in vinegar. It looks like a sewage that we
find under the man hole and under the streets. Some of the eating utensils like
spoon, fork, knife, metal bowl. Etc… are rusty, it got a sour-smell and it had
orange color in it. It also smelled like orange marmalade jam in soy-sauce. The
food that was cooked was
homogeneous, too plain and there was no salt to put so everything
is so plain and the food got no taste in it. Most of the food smelled like
tofu, just plain tofu with no sauce and it was hard to swallow because it was
too plain. The frying pan is very
heterogeneous, orange-brownish colored mixed with purplish –
green color at the handle. The food cooked in that frying pan looked orange –
blue with sesame on top. The refrigerator has a big rusty brownish red color on
top but the inside of the refrigerator is still chilly and cold. On top of the
refrigerator is the red apple. It looked green because it’s not ripen yet, and
it smelled so sour. So the kitchen at my home is nice and clean but boring and
plain!
I could see your kitchen in my head. You described it in detailed. However, this is more like a journal to me. I think you should use adjectives to describe it more than words to make it sound like a journal. This is already a good writing, I like it.
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Nice work Sirawut! This is one of the best essay i've ever read. I love how you describe those smell very clearly, but i think you should add some more picture so that it'll be more cool. How ever, your essay make me see yours kitchen very clearly
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